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Rain In Paradise

Kay Williams/Mott

January 17, 2018

Genre: Country

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Now don't ya want it to rain in paradise! Co-writes Emily Henline/Jean Nolan/Kay Mott

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Jason Street

I LOVE this!!! Certainly commercial market in my opinion.  Here are few critiques….
Line 3: Instead of Its just you and I, I would say but you and I…minor detail but may sing better.
2 Verse:  I was so hooked and then It dropped back into the chorus. I was excited the hear the next line so maybe that verse should be longer??
Bridge: I would just keep two lines and lose “and rain in paradise”
These are simply opinions…either way you have a great song here! I hope Brent sees this and comments. GREAT JOB!!

January 17, 2018

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Shane Trepeaux

Ah! Wow! Ok,.. where the heck is this island? I’m there! - Love it, and whata’ super commercial song!

I’ll tell ya, I really like the phrasing or lyrical flow of this a lot. The chord changes at ” rain in paradise” are the little super nugget freebie for the listener. Hard to find ANY negatives here at all. Other than, on a day like this, who draws the short straw and has to go flip the record over, huh??? Bummer!! I would want this day and this song to NEVER end!—HAHAHA! Very nice job and wish you much success!

January 18, 2018

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Kay Williams/Mott

Shane, how nice are you:)  You caught the vibe - that’s what we wanted.  Jean and Emily are the melody people.  Awesome people! Jean is the musician.  I’ll check out your music and thanks for ‘stoppin’ by’.

January 19, 2018

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Kay Williams/Mott

Oh, Shane, to answer your question, my husband took that picture on the Big Island, Hawaii.  (Near Waikaloa)

January 19, 2018

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Rain in Paradise
Emily Henline/ Kay Mott/ Jean Nolan

Raindrops rollin down palm tree leaves
Front row sets to an empty beach
Not a soul in sight it’s just you and I
Forget about that island hike
It’s way too wet to scuba dive
No banana boat ride let’s just stay inside

It’s a slow it down hang around, ain’t no sense in going out make a little magic to the vinyl sound
Kinda day
Let the waves be waves
Pour your love on me
Girl you’re everything
That I’ll ever need
I would trade a sunny day anywhere anytime
For a little rain in paradise

The way you’re dancing round that little screened in porch
Let your clothes fall down on the sandy floor
Baby maybe that’s what God made rain for

It’s a slow it down hang around, ain’t no sense in going out make a little magic to the vinyl sound
Kinda day
Let the waves be waves
Pour your love on me
Girl you’re everything
That I’ll ever need
I would trade a sunny day anywhere anytime
For a little rain in paradise

Everyone’s coming for the sunshine
But we’ll keep praying for cloudy skies
And rain in paradise

It’s a slow it down hang around, ain’t no sense in going out make a little magic to the vinlysound
Kinda day
Let the waves be waves
Pour your love on me
Girl you’re everything
That I’ll ever need

I would trade a sunny day anywhere anytime
For a little rain in paradise

Jean Nolan Music (SESAC) Kay Mott Music (BMI) Emily Henline (BMI)

I would trade a sunny day anywhere anytime
For a little rain in paradise
















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Jason Street

I LOVE this!!! Certainly commercial market in my opinion.  Here are few critiques….
Line 3: Instead of Its just you and I, I would say but you and I…minor detail but may sing better.
2 Verse:  I was so hooked and then It dropped back into the chorus. I was excited the hear the next line so maybe that verse should be longer??
Bridge: I would just keep two lines and lose “and rain in paradise”
These are simply opinions…either way you have a great song here! I hope Brent sees this and comments. GREAT JOB!!

January 17, 2018

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Shane Trepeaux

Ah! Wow! Ok,.. where the heck is this island? I’m there! - Love it, and whata’ super commercial song!

I’ll tell ya, I really like the phrasing or lyrical flow of this a lot. The chord changes at ” rain in paradise” are the little super nugget freebie for the listener. Hard to find ANY negatives here at all. Other than, on a day like this, who draws the short straw and has to go flip the record over, huh??? Bummer!! I would want this day and this song to NEVER end!—HAHAHA! Very nice job and wish you much success!

January 18, 2018

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Kay Williams/Mott

Shane, how nice are you:)  You caught the vibe - that’s what we wanted.  Jean and Emily are the melody people.  Awesome people! Jean is the musician.  I’ll check out your music and thanks for ‘stoppin’ by’.

January 19, 2018

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Kay Williams/Mott

Oh, Shane, to answer your question, my husband took that picture on the Big Island, Hawaii.  (Near Waikaloa)

January 19, 2018


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