This is a song I wrote that I think that most people can relate to and its a true portrayal of a previous marriage of mine. I think it shows the lighter side of arguments in relationships, and I feel like when people listen to it, they will realize that no matter what they are arguing about, your girl is always on your mind.
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Well here's another sad love song so you can all sing along
about a broken man with some broken dreams and a woman that did him wrong.
Now it wont be hard to follow yea the stories always the same
he spends to much time in the bottle and all she ever does is complain.
And he says darling oh darling I only stopped off for a few just a couple of shots of old Jim Beam Kentucky's finest 80 proof. I swear there wasn't a women in site its all about you and me tonight now see I love ya I need ya I don't wanna live with out ya
Now she started throwing everything then then the accusation's started to fly.
She even brought up my ex girlfriend and the times I made her cry.
She said you wont ever do this again and if you do boy it will be the end
now see I love ya I need ya I don't wanna live without ya ( Play it for me son )
Now I tried to calm her down some I told her honey your the only one
.She said now you don't have to lie to me your only out to have your fun.
And I know that you've been up to no good so I told her the only thing I could
see I love ya I need ya I don't wanna live without ya.
And I said darling oh darling I only stopped off for a few. see now me an the boys were playing guitar and the hours they just flew. Now I didn't see nothing wrong with that and hell in fact i think i am going back but see I love ya I need ya I don't wanna live without ya.
And I said darling oh darling I only stopped off for a few. Yea I would have called you sooner but I knew you wouldn't approve. Now if I'd known it would've started a fight I wouldn't have came home at all tonight but see i love ya I need ya I don't wanna live without ya ( You know that's right baby) I said I love ya I need ya I don't wanna live without ya. ( Lord have mercy on me woman) I said I love ya I need ya I dont wanna live without ya.
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