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Come Back To Me Acoustic

Noora Särkinen

December 03, 2017

Genre: Country

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Something I wrote about a year ago.

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Brent Baxter

Hi, Noora!  Thanks for sharing your song with us!  I like the internal rhyme on “company” and “comforts me.”

It’s a universal sentiment- wishing someone would come back.  That’s a great place from which to write.  I think the challenge and the opportunity is to find those little details/images that are real, specific, and fresh.  Paint a fresh picture of the same old emotion so many of us have felt.  Pull us into the movie.

Hope that helps!  Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song.  Thanks!

December 08, 2017

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Brent Baxter

Hi, Noora!  Thanks for sharing your song with us!  I like the internal rhyme on “company” and “comforts me.”

It’s a universal sentiment- wishing someone would come back.  That’s a great place from which to write.  I think the challenge and the opportunity is to find those little details/images that are real, specific, and fresh.  Paint a fresh picture of the same old emotion so many of us have felt.  Pull us into the movie.

Hope that helps!  Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song.  Thanks!

December 08, 2017


Come Back To Me Acoustic

Written by Noora Särkinen

Verse 1: I wish that you would know how hard it was
to get from my bed today
First thought on my mind was you
And now I feel like I don't wanna remember you

Chorus: This cup of coffee keeps me company,
keeps me company
It comforts me like I was close to you
But still I'm wishing that you'll come back to me
Come back to me

Verse 2: So what would you do if I call you
and tell you all these things running through my mind
Would you take my hand and say we'll be alright









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