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George Boley

October 18, 2017

Genre: Country

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My take on some of the things that are happening in todays world. I'm out of here.

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Brent Baxter

Hey, George!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like your title- clever.  I like that you went somewhere else in the 2nd verse and didn’t just keep harping on “music stinks these days.”

I wish you’d included the lyrics- it would make it easier to leave feedback (and encourage more feedback).

Now, it’s aiming at a very tiny commercial bullseye since it takes aim at current country radio and kinda comes off as “grumpy dad.”  But you helped soften some of that by including a bouncy beat.

October 18, 2017

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George Boley

Thanks Brent. I apreciate the comments. I’d love to return the favor if you send my something of yours.

October 22, 2017

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INCLUDE ME OUT

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Brent Baxter

Hey, George!  Thanks for sharing your song with us.  I like your title- clever.  I like that you went somewhere else in the 2nd verse and didn’t just keep harping on “music stinks these days.”

I wish you’d included the lyrics- it would make it easier to leave feedback (and encourage more feedback).

Now, it’s aiming at a very tiny commercial bullseye since it takes aim at current country radio and kinda comes off as “grumpy dad.”  But you helped soften some of that by including a bouncy beat.

October 18, 2017

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George Boley

Thanks Brent. I apreciate the comments. I’d love to return the favor if you send my something of yours.

October 22, 2017


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