A parable about rightiousness that could be a cross over to country depending on the artist's demeanor.
Please, give me any feedback. I plan on plugging this song to David Crowder. It seems to be more of his style.
Thanks, Michael for the compliment. I will, if I can add more instruments.
September 05, 2017
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Nice song Bob. I would like it much better performed without the drums and I believe would have allowed your song to shine much better and as you as a singer-songwriter.
September 07, 2017
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I love the music of each verse. I agree I think the drums aren’t necessary.
January 26, 2018
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Didn’t like the following line (it seemed awkward):
I had to turn it around from a wrong way road knowing
Best wishes in your songwriting endeavors.
August 07, 2018
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When I saw my life and where it was going
I had to turn it around from a wrong way road knowing
there had to be a better way from the nights
then I saw a road with a light
with a sign showing God's word and I knew it was right
oo oo oo I'm on the road less traveled
oo oo oo oo I'm on the road less traveled
not many people will go this way
for the road is old and settled
but at least I know where I am going
on the road less traveled
As I journey on this path least taken
I see it's narrow and long and almost forsaken
so I'm telling the world what I know
I'm keeping my faith on the road
bound for the glory and the gates of heaven it will go
Do you wanna catch a ride
just pack your soul and look inside 'cause
oo oo oo I'm on the road less traveled
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Hey Bob,Nice. I like the chord progression on the verses. The production would sound a little better with real base and drums, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing
September 04, 2017
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Thanks, Michael for the compliment. I will, if I can add more instruments.
September 05, 2017
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Nice song Bob. I would like it much better performed without the drums and I believe would have allowed your song to shine much better and as you as a singer-songwriter.
September 07, 2017
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I love the music of each verse. I agree I think the drums aren’t necessary.
January 26, 2018
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Didn’t like the following line (it seemed awkward):
I had to turn it around from a wrong way road knowing
Best wishes in your songwriting endeavors.
August 07, 2018
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Michael Casali
Hey Bob,Nice. I like the chord progression on the verses. The production would sound a little better with real base and drums, in my opinion. Thanks for sharing
September 04, 2017
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