You've heard your whole life "don't talk to strangers." Very rarely are we reminded that it's a lonely life when we remained closed off to others. Some of the best conversations of my life have been with people I had just met.
Despite the slower pace, does the song "stick" and interest you to keep listening?
Hey Joey, love the vjbe of this haunting tune, It really draws me in. We should lift each other out of there, Ain’t nobody without weight…yes.
September 04, 2017
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Hey, Joey! Thanks for sharing your song with us. Wish you’d included the lyrics. Would’ve made it easier to dive into this one. But… here we go…
That’s an interesting title and how you get to it. “Ain’t nobody without weight.” We all matter. Cool.
Man, I’m digging this. Some cool lines. I like the vibe. Some nice imagery “crying at the top of the stairs” “tip over” and others.
Yes, it’s slower. But I like the conversational tone of it. Nice work.
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August 06, 2017
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Hey Joey, love the vjbe of this haunting tune, It really draws me in. We should lift each other out of there, Ain’t nobody without weight…yes.
September 04, 2017
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Hey, Joey! Thanks for sharing your song with us. Wish you’d included the lyrics. Would’ve made it easier to dive into this one. But… here we go…
That’s an interesting title and how you get to it. “Ain’t nobody without weight.” We all matter. Cool.
Man, I’m digging this. Some cool lines. I like the vibe. Some nice imagery “crying at the top of the stairs” “tip over” and others.
Yes, it’s slower. But I like the conversational tone of it. Nice work.
Hope this helps. Please pay it forward by leaving a comment on another writer’s song. Thanks!
August 06, 2017
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