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concrete or sand

Richard Kirk

July 19, 2017

Genre: Country

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About This Song

from my hook book-sorry this is the second time I've Submitted. Somehow got ahead of myself and didn't load lyrics. Song about singer wondering if the sparks of his new love will last or not.

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Where I want to get to with this is that somehow the singer KNOWS that what they've got is built on Concrete- or will last, (as much as anyone can) as opposed to just wondering if it will. That creates some challenges about how the hook itself is sung. I. e. Concrete not on Sand., or something like that. Any way that's it. Thanks.

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concrete or sand

Written by Richard Kirk