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Take This Sinner by the Hand

Gregg Shively

May 04, 2017

Genre: Christian

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my first foray into a 'blues' structure ... simple with guitar, finger pops & bgv from Tiffany Dirks (love it when I get to sing with angels) ...

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Dave Quirk

Hey Gregg, this is fantastic!  the vocals are great, and that guitar is outstanding!  I’m a sucker for blues….love the fingersnaps when they come in during the second half of your first verse.  Great work!

May 16, 2017

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Bob Abner

INTERESTING!  I think you’re a fine player, very nice job, and this song got my attention!!!  I think you should think about seriously “plugging” (pushing) this song!

Only one small critique—I simply wish you had included the lyrics, as I would have liked to follow along while listening to your song.

Anyway, best wishes, and I think this is really very good, very solid!

August 08, 2018

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Myrna Riquier

Hard to believe this is your “first” blues song. It is very very good. You are very talented Gregg.

October 09, 2018

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Take This Sinner by the...

Written by Gregg Shively

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Dave Quirk

Hey Gregg, this is fantastic!  the vocals are great, and that guitar is outstanding!  I’m a sucker for blues….love the fingersnaps when they come in during the second half of your first verse.  Great work!

May 16, 2017

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Bob Abner

INTERESTING!  I think you’re a fine player, very nice job, and this song got my attention!!!  I think you should think about seriously “plugging” (pushing) this song!

Only one small critique—I simply wish you had included the lyrics, as I would have liked to follow along while listening to your song.

Anyway, best wishes, and I think this is really very good, very solid!

August 08, 2018

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Myrna Riquier

Hard to believe this is your “first” blues song. It is very very good. You are very talented Gregg.

October 09, 2018


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