I wrote this song with Neill Skylar and Jason Cox.
Man, the music and the vibe and lyrics all match perfectly! I like how verse 1 has the singer saying “I’ve been__”, then verse 2 has her saying “you’re the___”. Brings the story forward well - nice!
Who’s singing the demo Brent? Sounds like someone I know, so I’m curious…
May 16, 2017
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Hey, Dave! The singer is my cowriter, Neill Skylar. (It’s so much fun to write with good singers!)
May 17, 2017
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wow,,great,,,got the story right away,,love the analogies,,great guitar in the intro
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(Brent Baxter, Jason Cox, Neill Skylar)
I’ve been the whiskey on a liar’s lips
And I’ve been the midnight romance, sunrise regret
I’ve been the suitcase left on the curb
And I’ve been the desperate phonecall, unreturned
But you’ve shown me
I was always meant to be... Your
CHORUS:
First good morning
And your last good night
The one you’re holding
For the rest of your life
Your love has changed me, and baby, I promise this
You are my last first kiss
You’re the rose lying on the bed
You’re the honest touch soft against my skin
And you’re the road that leads me to myself
Every penny I’ve ever thrown in a wishing well
And you’ve shown me
I was always meant to be... Your
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
CHORUS:
You’re my first good morning
And my last good night
The one I’m holding
For the rest of my life
Your love has changed me and baby I promise this
You are my last first kiss
If forever could ever feel half as good as this
You are my last first kiss
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Beautiful song. I really like the use of soft rhymes throughout the song… it supports the overall feeling.
Great job!
Phillip
April 21, 2017
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Man, the music and the vibe and lyrics all match perfectly! I like how verse 1 has the singer saying “I’ve been__”, then verse 2 has her saying “you’re the___”. Brings the story forward well - nice!
Who’s singing the demo Brent? Sounds like someone I know, so I’m curious…
May 16, 2017
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Hey, Dave! The singer is my cowriter, Neill Skylar. (It’s so much fun to write with good singers!)
May 17, 2017
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wow,,great,,,got the story right away,,love the analogies,,great guitar in the intro
May 08, 2020
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Phillip Lemmonds
Beautiful song. I really like the use of soft rhymes throughout the song… it supports the overall feeling.
Great job!
Phillip
April 21, 2017
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