I wrote this song with Steve Leslie and Zarni de Vette. We're currently pitching, pitching, and pitching it...
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Everything a girl wants to hear so from a girls perspective very well written! love the uptempo! from a listener of music:)
March 07, 2017
Extremely cool angle, and not what I would have expected. Really smart, and gets the head bobbing…
March 26, 2017
Hey Brent, love the repetition in the first verse (“I do, I do, I do)”....the beat/vibe is so cool, perfect match for the idea! And I loved the quick turn from verse 2 back to the chorus. My only thought was, I expected the melody to stay big, maybe even go bigger/higher towards the end of that first line of the chorus?? Maybe not, just thought it would hit me harder and then the rest of the chorus would feel great as is. Thanks for posting and letting us see The Maestro at work. 
April 04, 2017
Love it! This is a good reminder for being descriptive. Most of us amateurs would just talk about how much we “love your body” but wouldn’t go into why. Great song! Hope it gets cut!
May 30, 2017
Thanks, ya’ll! I appreciate your thoughts! Keep posting and keep helping each other out!
May 31, 2017
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Wonder if you got a cut? I like the song and the verses are really strong, lyric as well as the melody, but my feeling is that the chorus maybe not strong enough for a hit.
February 09, 2018
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(Brent Baxter, Steve Leslie, Zarni de Vette)
Girl, I see the way you look at that magazine
Now you’re staring at the mirror hating everything
And I can tell you don’t like what you see
But I do, I do, I do
I could say you’re perfect
And I’m the luckiest guy on earth
‘Cuz I am, but I wanna go a little deeper
Tell you why, baby, you’re a keeper
CHORUS:
Girl, you got that shoulder that I lean on
Lips that tell the truth whether I like it or not
Eyes that see the silver lining
Girl, you’re put together right
A strong backbone and dancing feet
What you’re working with sure works for me
Girl, I love your body, love your body
Girl, I love your body, love your body
Girl, you know I can’t keep my hands off ‘a you
Wanna cover you in all kinds of kisses
But even if you didn’t look the way you do
You’d still be sexy through and through... ‘cuz
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
BRIDGE:
Girl, I love your body, love your body
Girl, I love your body, love your body
Girl, I love your body, love your body
Girl, I love your body, love your body
CHORUS: [REPEAT]
3
I am not really into country, but after listening to your song the motivation to reconsider has presented itself. I am in no way a professional, but your song sounded well put together. I liked it.
February 16, 2017
2
Everything a girl wants to hear so from a girls perspective very well written! love the uptempo! from a listener of music:)
March 07, 2017
1
Extremely cool angle, and not what I would have expected. Really smart, and gets the head bobbing…
March 26, 2017
1
Hey Brent, love the repetition in the first verse (“I do, I do, I do)”....the beat/vibe is so cool, perfect match for the idea! And I loved the quick turn from verse 2 back to the chorus. My only thought was, I expected the melody to stay big, maybe even go bigger/higher towards the end of that first line of the chorus?? Maybe not, just thought it would hit me harder and then the rest of the chorus would feel great as is. Thanks for posting and letting us see The Maestro at work.
April 04, 2017
1
Love it! This is a good reminder for being descriptive. Most of us amateurs would just talk about how much we “love your body” but wouldn’t go into why. Great song! Hope it gets cut!
May 30, 2017
0
Thanks, ya’ll! I appreciate your thoughts! Keep posting and keep helping each other out!
May 31, 2017
0
Wonder if you got a cut? I like the song and the verses are really strong, lyric as well as the melody, but my feeling is that the chorus maybe not strong enough for a hit.
February 09, 2018
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Cameron Scott
I am not really into country, but after listening to your song the motivation to reconsider has presented itself. I am in no way a professional, but your song sounded well put together. I liked it.
February 16, 2017