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Maybe Tomorrow - demo - (Ronnie Glenn)

Ronnie Glenn

December 10, 2016

Genre: Country

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The demo singer is Michael Lusk


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Brent Baxter

Oh, it’s nice to hear something that swings a little!  I’d love to hear more stuff like this on the radio.  On the downside, the lyrics just grab me.  it all felt pretty good, and I got the basic point of the song.  But there wasn’t a big takeaway for me as a listener.  I walk away with “that felt good.”  But I didn’t walk away with anything memorable except for “something about cupid.”  But the cupid thing isn’t that unique.  Give us something that we haven’t heard before, I guess is my best advice.  But there’s definitely some good writing there, so keep at it! (And thanks for sharing your song!)

December 22, 2016

Ronnie Glenn

Thanks Brent for the GREAT feedback on this! I will work on rewriting the lyrics and strengthening the melody in the future. Not sure if I can pull it together on my own but I will give it my best shot.  Thanks for listening. Merry Christmas!

December 23, 2016

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Brent Baxter

Oh, it’s nice to hear something that swings a little!  I’d love to hear more stuff like this on the radio.  On the downside, the lyrics just grab me.  it all felt pretty good, and I got the basic point of the song.  But there wasn’t a big takeaway for me as a listener.  I walk away with “that felt good.”  But I didn’t walk away with anything memorable except for “something about cupid.”  But the cupid thing isn’t that unique.  Give us something that we haven’t heard before, I guess is my best advice.  But there’s definitely some good writing there, so keep at it! (And thanks for sharing your song!)

December 22, 2016

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Ronnie Glenn

Thanks Brent for the GREAT feedback on this! I will work on rewriting the lyrics and strengthening the melody in the future. Not sure if I can pull it together on my own but I will give it my best shot.  Thanks for listening. Merry Christmas!

December 23, 2016


Maybe Tomorrow - demo - ...

Written by Ronnie Glenn

Maybe Tomorrow
( Ronnie Glenn )

Every once in a while that cupid don’t miss
When he’s right on target we seal it with a kiss
What I’m talking about is love sweetheart
So between you and me where do we start

CHORUS
They say it doesn’t happen overnight
And it’s not always love at first sight
But somewhere, somehow those feelings will grow
Trying to find true love can be tough
And sometimes you feel like giving up
Soon your heart will know where to go
If not today, then maybe tomorrow

Every now and then an X marks the spot
When cupid’s aim is true he knows who ties the knot
For better or worse he’s your four letter man
And love’s the only reason the heart can understand

CHORUS

If not today…
Then maybe tomorrow, maybe tomorrow
Every once in awhile that cupid don’t miss

© Ronnie Glenn, All Rights Reserved

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