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I’m Having Too Much Fun Tonight

Kyle Mercer

February 24, 2018

Genre: Country

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Work tape for an upbeat little country song about a fellow whose social skills might leave a little something to be desired.

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I’m Having Too Much...

Written by Kyle Mercer

Well I got out of jail
Felt like raisin' some hell
So I wandered down to Hurly's saloon
Scored a booth in the back
Stole some meth, little crack
Off a couple of Columbian goons
I think I's on my fifth beer
Maybe my fourth Everclear
I'd won two out of three bar room fights
I hit on Hurly's wife Flo
So Hurly asked me to go
He said I'm having too much fun tonight

He said, You're having too much fun tonight now boy
You're having too much fun tonight
Best take your foot off the gas
'Fore I put mine up your ass
You can't be havin' that much fun tonight.

Well I can take me a hint
When I see gun metal glint
I grabbed a waitress and I rolled out the door
She said, I'm still on my shift
I said, Hey babe, don't be miffed
Life is short, a gal like you deserves more
I got a '65 Bonneville
A big back seat
I got a pillow for your head
I got stirrups for your feet
She said, That sounds mighty fine
We'll have to try it sometime
But you've been having too much fun tonight

She said, You're having too much fun tonight, pretty baby
You been having too much fun tonight
She said, You talk mighty big
But there's no steel in your rig
'Cause you been having too much fun tonight

Well she jumped out at the light
Blew me kisses goodbye
I watched her wiggle-walk herself down the road
I know the gal she's a tart
But there's this pain in my heart
Like she done popped it with a double-ought load
Now I been shot down by the best
Been slapped around by all the rest
But I've never known it ever fail
To ring a lady's bell
It's a pickle of a plight
You know I hate it when they're right
I might be havin' too much fun tonight

She said You're having too much fun tonight, pretty baby
You been having too much fun tonight
She said, We gave it our best
Go home and give it some rest
'Cause you been having too much fun tonight

Well when I got out of jail
I felt like raising some hell
So I wandered down to Hurley's saloon
Scored a booth in the back
Stole some meth, little crack
Off a couple of Columbian goons
Then Hurley gets a little pissy
'Cause I'm hitting on his missy
And his waitress jumps shift and takes flight
To make a long story short
The evening wasn't worth a fart
'Cause I was having too much fun tonight

Well I've been having too much fun tonight, pretty baby
I been having too much fun tonight
I'll make a long story short
The evening wasn't worth a fart
'Cause I was having too much fun tonight

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