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Don Nelson

April 16, 2015

Don Nelson gave feedback on The Legacy

thanks for the input Dick. I hear you - but have to admit that one of my favorite things in songwriting is juxtaposing lyrical content with its almost opposite musical tone - especially in joke songs like this one. If the music is light-heated you can cut deeper into the... Read More

March 27, 2014

Don Nelson gave feedback on Marry You

Hi Meaghan I enjoyed this a lot. i agree with Adma’s comment above - this song feels very complete to me - strong arrangement, good musicianship - good vox -good song! I especially liked the “in a courtroom” part - nice little wrinkle going on there. It kind of... Read More

March 27, 2014

Don Nelson gave feedback on The Cycle

Hi Joshua I like the opening riff this song is built around a lot - it kind of reminds me a little of Pinback - in a good way. I’m not as crazy about the “ring around the roses” verses - I wish some words a little less cliche’... Read More

March 06, 2014

Don Nelson gave feedback on Done With Love

I liked this a lot - great vocals!  Not sure if this arrangement was meant to be a rough-out or not - but as a finished product I’d kind of like to hear bass and drums and maybe a piano come in at the start the of 2nd... Read More

February 20, 2014

Don Nelson gave feedback on This Place

Hi Christopher Great vocals - great arrangement and guitar work!  I’m not as keen on the lyrics - they seem kind of disjointed to me - and the “inner child” reference is kind of a clunker for me - but mainly I’m not sure if you’re... Read More

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