Joined: November 12, 2018
Roger Likes: 13 Songs
Oslo, Norway
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=INqC7hS3TzY&list=PLee1fJCxhy3pOHaGMMRxGRsGKfIFLqw1r
Roger Storrud gave feedback on The Road Where Love Lives on
Thank you, Frank. I will definitely consider writing more about his feelings and reflections. You might be right there. When it comes to the first suggestion, shortening the upbeat leading into the chorus - I am not sure. I kind of like the rather long intro to the top note.... Read More
Roger Storrud gave feedback on Don't Let Me Down, Belle
Hi Reid and Frank, Thank you for your feedback. I am aware of what you mean when you say that it becomes clear later in the song that he sings to his car. But as you can see with the little changes in the chorus (adding bolts etc.) it is... Read More
Roger Storrud gave feedback on I Didn't Catch Her Name
Hi Courtney, I really like this song. The harmonies are good and you do interesting things getting towards the hook. I have a couple of comments about the form though. I heard the lyrics before I read them. At first I thought that this was a pre-chorus “Then she was... Read More
Roger Storrud gave feedback on Silver Lake
I really like the melody and the chord progressions. Good compositional craftsmanship. I feel the bridge should lead into the last chorus instead of fading half-heartedly. And I would rather have images making me identify with/feel your sadness than hearing you telling about your misery. Show - don’t... Read More
Roger Storrud gave feedback on Yes Means Maybe
Thanks, Rusty. It is not meant to be funny as such. But do you mean girls wouldn’t like it because of the attitude in verse one? Or is the whole message not ok?