Joined: November 7, 2018
Lee Likes: 8 Songs
Lee Myers gave feedback on Hobo Heart
Bob, I like this song. Especially the bridge where the singer explains why he has a hobo heart. Have you thought about reserving the title “hobo heart” to your verses and chorus? This might make the title have a stronger impact when it is heard. One minor detail—... Read More
Lee Myers gave feedback on Long Days
Hi Dan, Positive song of encouragement. In the first verse, you’ve established the singer/singee connection well—-one friend advising another going through tough times. We now know who singer is and why the singer is singing. The first verse feels as if the worst is over... Read More
Lee Myers gave feedback on Knee Deep In Loving You
Marvin, This is an excellent production expressing a universal emotion: ” I’m in love.” The song,to me, however, could use better contrast between the sections. They all sound like they are on the same level melodically. More importantly, the setup lines proceeding the hook/title line “Knee deep... Read More
Lee Myers gave feedback on Instant Of Time
Hi Jeff, This is an excellent production. But, for me, there are a few bumps. First, the song’s title. It’s redundant to say “Instant of Time” when an “instant” means a precise moment of time. This title may cause clarity issues for the listener. Thus, the... Read More