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March 16, 2019

Lee Myers gave feedback on Instant Of Time

Hi Jeff, This is an excellent production.  But, for me, there are a few bumps. First, the song’s title. It’s redundant to say “Instant of Time” when an “instant” means a precise moment of time.  This title may cause clarity issues for the listener. Thus, the... Read More

March 14, 2019

Lee Myers gave feedback on Hobo Heart

Bob, I like this song. Especially the bridge where the singer explains why he has a hobo heart.  Have you thought about reserving the title “hobo heart” to your verses and chorus?  This might make the title have a stronger impact when it is heard. One minor detail—... Read More

March 14, 2019

Lee Myers gave feedback on Long Days

Hi Dan, Positive song of encouragement.  In the first verse, you’ve established the singer/singee connection well—-one friend advising another going through tough times.  We now know who singer is and why the singer is singing. The first verse feels as if the worst is over... Read More

March 11, 2019

Lee Myers gave feedback on Blessed

Kirk, I love the sound here.  Have you ever thought about rewriting lyrics to fit another genre?  To me, the song sounds like it’s rock. Anyway,love the throwback sound. Keep writing.

March 11, 2019

Lee Myers gave feedback on Knee Deep In Loving You

Marvin, This is an excellent production expressing a universal emotion: ” I’m in love.” The song,to me, however, could use better contrast between the sections.  They all sound like they are on the same level melodically. More importantly, the setup lines proceeding the hook/title line “Knee deep... Read More

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