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Ariel Moore

February 01, 2019

Ariel Moore gave feedback on JUST A WORKIN' MAN

Tony thanks for the suggestion of Ronnie Dunn.  I’d be very happy indeed if he’d sing this, one can only try!

February 01, 2019

Ariel Moore gave feedback on JUST A WORKIN' MAN

Stephen glad you like it!  I really appreciate you taking the time to listen.  I’ll take another look at the bridge melody, thanks!

January 27, 2019

Ariel Moore gave feedback on FOR THE DOGS SAKE

Thank you so much Lee!

January 26, 2019

Ariel Moore gave feedback on Deeper Roots

I like this Fox.  Good lyric, I think the tone of the song could be a little quicker tempo, not a lot, it just drags a bit. I agree with Haydee on “sharpen my saw”.  You’re obviously good at painting verbal pictures so I know you can... Read More

January 26, 2019

Ariel Moore gave feedback on Bullfrog Pond

A lot of good lyrics here!  Very descriptive, really visual and takes you right there!  Great job!