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Myrna Riquier

November 30, 2018

Myrna Riquier gave feedback on Love's Gonna Get Us All

I can relate to Marvin’s comments. I also wanted the melody line in the chorus to continue on its climb (3rd line) but it was brought back down quickly. I thought you gave up a nice chance there to bring in some robust and reaching harmonies. It seems it... Read More

November 25, 2018

Myrna Riquier gave feedback on Two More Waiter

Marvin, your song put a smile on my face. I do like traditional country, especially in your updated style. Joseph is right that it’s a George strait song. Not sure if he’s still making records. But there are others doing this style song. And the genre needs to... Read More

November 13, 2018

Myrna Riquier gave feedback on In the Shadow of the Son

Thank you Reid. I do know there are many bluegrass artists doing traditional bluegrass music at this time.  I haven’t been able to connect with them, but I know they are out there. Thanks again for your nice comments.

November 01, 2018

Myrna Riquier gave feedback on Start All Over Again

I tend to agree with Frank that the chorus melody could stand out more from the verses. I would love to write a new melody (privately) for the chorus to make it more distinct and maybe tweak the lyrics a bit to give the chorus a rhyme ending. My new... Read More

November 01, 2018

Myrna Riquier gave feedback on Hear That Train

Thanks for your feedback Bob. I understand what you are saying about the bass line. I probably won’t get another demo made for it’s just going to sit in the drawer anyway. But it is nice to hear that I did something right with this song. I do... Read More