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October 09, 2018

Walter Lamberg gave feedback on WORLDS APART

Michael, I enjoyed this song.  I think you have an excellent hook/title, “Worlds Apart,” which sums up the differences between the man and woman, and you flesh out those differences with concrete details. The repetition of the hook is effective.  You might consider changing the title to “... Read More

October 05, 2018

Walter Lamberg gave feedback on Better Memories

Marvin, This is a wonderful song.  You do just what is needed for a song about “Better Memories”:  You use the verses to present very specific concrete examples of those memories, like “Grandma scoldin’ grandpa for teasin’ us.”  Then you use the chorus to sum up the... Read More

October 05, 2018

Walter Lamberg gave feedback on A Patient Man

Marvin, I agree with you.  When you have an excellent hook, as you do, and you handle it the right way, it can and maybe should come at the beginning and end of the chorus.  A good example is Trace Adkins’ “You’re Gonna Miss This.” Enjoyed your... Read More