Joined: October 1, 2018
Walter Likes: 4 Songs
Pueblo, Colorado
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Walter Lamberg gave feedback on 1-800-Goodbye
Marvin, I really like this song. There are lots of country songs about the same situation—a woman is unhappy and leaves because of the way her man treats her. You give it a fresh approach with a few details and images, e.g., taking a Greyhound bus,... Read More
Walter Lamberg gave feedback on Aspen
Brent, thank you for your helpful suggestions. I did think the song was somewhat long as was the bridge. I definitely like the idea of making the chorus Verse 1 and the ideas in the bridge Verse 2. I will have to give some thought as to how to... Read More
Walter Lamberg gave feedback on WORLDS APART
Michael, I enjoyed this song. I think you have an excellent hook/title, “Worlds Apart,” which sums up the differences between the man and woman, and you flesh out those differences with concrete details. The repetition of the hook is effective. You might consider changing the title to “... Read More
Walter Lamberg gave feedback on Better Memories
Marvin, This is a wonderful song. You do just what is needed for a song about “Better Memories”: You use the verses to present very specific concrete examples of those memories, like “Grandma scoldin’ grandpa for teasin’ us.” Then you use the chorus to sum up the... Read More
Walter Lamberg gave feedback on Aspen
I decided to revise the song because 1. it needed a chorus that expressed a main idea, 2. the song was too long, and 3.some details needed to be deleted (I might use those details in a second song about Aspen and her best friend - a cat). https://soundcloud.com/user-547002904... Read More