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November 12, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Today for Sure

Hi Reid, Thanks for the feedback.  I haven’t been coming here very often and I just discovered your comments.  Thanks so much and I trust you are writing with the fever….wishing you continued success. Hi Lee, Thank you for the feedback regarding the lyrics.  I... Read More

September 24, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Rock and Roll Women

Great concept here Reid!  The chorus melodically could be stronger with phrasing different from the verse.  The chorus words are wonderful in my opinion….just gotta get to the chorus a little faster from the verses…kinda too long…make that chorus stand out so it smacks us... Read More

September 24, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Summer 's Gone

Listening now…love the intro and the sultry atmosphere.  It’s great that you got to the chorus so quickly, very strong hook, excellent song!  My only suggestion would be to title it “Cloud Nine.”  Good luck with this..so worth a placement:)

August 15, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You

I don’t know Reid, it’s nice but I hope you don’t mind me saying that it needs more of a story….you know that writer’s rule, “don’t tell me, show me.”  Show us so that we can feel what the singer is feeling. ... Read More

August 15, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on You Can’t Save Yourself

Reid, I just listened to the updated version and wow sounds very cool!!  Writing is hard enough but it’s the rewrites that take work and obviously you have been working very hard…great job, congrats!