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August 15, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Who's the Matter With You

I don’t know Reid, it’s nice but I hope you don’t mind me saying that it needs more of a story….you know that writer’s rule, “don’t tell me, show me.”  Show us so that we can feel what the singer is feeling. ... Read More

August 15, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on You Can’t Save Yourself

Reid, I just listened to the updated version and wow sounds very cool!!  Writing is hard enough but it’s the rewrites that take work and obviously you have been working very hard…great job, congrats!

August 15, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on Today for Sure

Bob and Reid, Thanks for listening.  Yes I’m singing and Mauro (one of the co-writers) is playing the guitar.  The lyrics still need work and further clarification…. someday.  Thanks again to you both for your encouraging words and for stopping by.

August 13, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on God’s Little Half Acre

Listening and be touched by this story Marvin.  The chorus is strong and the truth is honest and heartfelt.  Really love this song Marvin.

August 11, 2018

Dori Weaver gave feedback on You Can’t Save Yourself

I agree the message here is very positive.  Reid, that chorus is a gem in the rough.  Regarding the “You can’t save yourself” please try holding that phrase out longer and melody could be higher to set it apart from the verse, creating greater contrast…honestly, make... Read More