Joined: May 29, 2018
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dave freeman gave feedback on A Sign
I co-wrote a similar “style” song that I felt strongly about writing - not caring about the answers to your two questions. When it got flatly rejected last April on those merits alone, I put it away and moved on to write other songs. I played if from time to... Read More
dave freeman gave feedback on Get Away For The Weekend
Great song AND great arrangment. Love the hook! I really like how all of the musical elements are spread across the stereo field. I wonder if you tried a fill/leadup to “don’t give up, don’t give in” instead of the accented snare hits - but really a... Read More
dave freeman gave feedback on Rocking Chair ( country/bluegrass )
Really like the imagery of this
dave freeman gave feedback on Fire in The Ice
Hi Jolene - you also “got me” with the title as well I love the concept and I’m wondering if you have a melody in mind?
dave freeman gave feedback on 5 To 9
Great song - the bridge lyrics are a fantastic turn of the story!