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Bobby Davis

February 24, 2018

Bobby Davis gave feedback on In One Night

Thanks for the feedback Donna.  Agree with the step over the Teddy Bear part. If I remember…I changed the lyrics to kick the kids Teddy Bear up against the wall as you walked with her down our hall.  So use to writing with a bridge…you may... Read More

February 23, 2018

Bobby Davis gave feedback on Indian Land

Parts has that Door’s Feel.  Would of liked a little more power guitar in the beginning of the song. I also noticed the paced picked up after the first verse or so.  Maybe a slight pause or drum lead in to the faster beat.  Then throw... Read More

February 23, 2018

Bobby Davis gave feedback on Girl with the Guitar case

Like the idea Frank. I really expected the bridge to be something different than it was. I actually thought she might be a street player playing for tips.  Good melody and idea.

February 23, 2018

Bobby Davis gave feedback on In One Night

Thanks Frank! I know it’s direct but sometimes it’s best not to beat around the bush. Every lady I played it for has liked it! Men…not so much. Thanks again for the feedback.

February 23, 2018

Bobby Davis gave feedback on Hard Cider

Wow I might pitch this as an instrumental.  Great blend!