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Gordon Donaldson

March 08, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

Thanks Frank. And yes you are right about this genre that you can get away with more. We started off by trying to write a country song, but it wanted to be something else, more indie-rock than anything. Thanks for your comments, will take a look at the song, and... Read More

March 06, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Wild Horse Rider

This song has a double hook! In the verse and in the chorus: yeah, she’s like that. Which makes the song even stronger, in my opinion. One day I hope to hear this song on the radio.

March 03, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on You're okay

I like how it sounds, but I would like it to have more bite ‘lyrically’, especially in the verses. Maybe you could paint a picture of her perfect world come crashing down etc. She just had one of those days. I would like to see more bite in the verses.

March 03, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Summer Evenings

A great song worthy of your voice, telling a simple, a heart-warming story. I can’t wait to hear the other instruments added to the demo.

February 28, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Thats Okay With Me

First off, the song sounds good, although the story is not fully there yet. The 1st verse is all over the place, and needs to be rewritten. It doesn’t set up the story well. Where he wants to take things fast, and she wants to take things slow. Could... Read More