Joined: February 11, 2018
Gordon Likes: 2 Songs
Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on You're okay
I like how it sounds, but I would like it to have more bite ‘lyrically’, especially in the verses. Maybe you could paint a picture of her perfect world come crashing down etc. She just had one of those days. I would like to see more bite in the verses.
Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Summer Evenings
A great song worthy of your voice, telling a simple, a heart-warming story. I can’t wait to hear the other instruments added to the demo.
Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Thats Okay With Me
First off, the song sounds good, although the story is not fully there yet. The 1st verse is all over the place, and needs to be rewritten. It doesn’t set up the story well. Where he wants to take things fast, and she wants to take things slow. Could... Read More
Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on A Cab You Can Call
I like how the song comes full circle, a complete song, a nice tempo, and the perfect voice to match this song. I love the instinctive way you play with words, without overdoing it.
Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets
Thanks Frank. And yes you are right about this genre that you can get away with more. We started off by trying to write a country song, but it wanted to be something else, more indie-rock than anything. Thanks for your comments, will take a look at the song, and... Read More