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February 22, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on More Than I Need

A nice song that’s easy to listen to. Well done…

February 22, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on A Cab You Can Call

I like how the song comes full circle, a complete song, a nice tempo, and the perfect voice to match this song. I love the instinctive way you play with words, without overdoing it.

February 22, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on Mount Everest

I loved the song as a whole, as it all flowed nicely. I would fix the lines that were supposed to rhyme but didn’t.

February 21, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

Thank you, Lisa for your comments and suggestions. Yes, you are right that that part doesn’t flow as well, and we could use it as the bridge (as suggested). I appreciate all your comments. Thank you…

February 21, 2018

Gordon Donaldson gave feedback on A Barfly's Benediction

A funny, little song that I could see it in the hands of a comedian who sings or comedy singer. Well done. I think another verse inbetween one and two would be great, as this might be a little short for someone to record. Anyway, I want to hear more!