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February 21, 2018

Lisa Caterbone gave feedback on Girl with the Guitar case

I like the line ‘for mom it’s like going to war’. My parents thought the same thing when I moved to the West Coast.

February 21, 2018

Lisa Caterbone gave feedback on As Beautiful As It Gets

I love the verse melody and chords. I love the chorus melody and chords. The ‘in-between’ threw me a little. Not in a bad way, but it almost felt like a different song for a quick second. I may be inclined to use that section as a bridge only and... Read More

February 21, 2018

Lisa Caterbone gave feedback on Once in a Lifetime Girl

The production, instruments and vocals are all very well done!  I live in Vegas, so gambling is something I am familiar with and don’t do often because I hardly ever win win.  I don’t mind the sports metaphors, but if you wanted to stick to more... Read More

February 21, 2018

Lisa Caterbone gave feedback on Life Was Fantastic With You

Thanks Gordon. I am especially pleased to hear you liked the production, as I did it myself.    (Always learning new skills.)

February 21, 2018

Lisa Caterbone gave feedback on Rise Again (Country Pop Mix)

Thanks everyone for the feedback. I’m generally getting mixed feelings from this song. People who aren’t songwriters seem to like that it has that universal appeal, whereas songwriters want me to dig in more deeply. I get it. I do. I am inclined to make some lyrical changes... Read More