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Frank Renfordt

April 15, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Small Town Heart

Hi Daniel, I like the feel of the song but I had some difficulties to follow the structure. I expected a chorus all the time and I thought the part after the first two verses would be kind of a chorus, but you didn’t repeat this part after the... Read More

April 15, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Fall In Love Again

Hi Steve - I like this song, it has a nice feel and I can relate to the lyric. Consider to re-write the first verse with a similar phrasing and rhyme scheme as you used in the second verse. The second verse has a better flow than the first one.... Read More

April 15, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I Tried For A Long Time To Write You A Song

Ha ha, so cool… three chords and the truth -that’s Country!

April 15, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Cross Your Heart

Thanks for sharing another nice, well crafted song. I think there is still a bigger audience for staff like this, we all grow up and get older and so many are missing more traditional country songs on the radio. Keep on!

April 08, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Everything Changed

Haydee - thank you for your encouraging feedback! I also have learned something today. I already knew that it is better to avoid brand names, now I know why. I thought in case with Starbucks it would be harmless, because Starbucks is kind of an institution and very popular in... Read More