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December 02, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Hey Girl

Brett, Reid and Roger I really appreciate your comments - thank you so much for listening. I’m working on the song, I have changed the chorus a bit with an ‘hey girl’ in the last line and I’ve skipped three lines of the second verse. Roger - you... Read More

December 02, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Shuffle and Deal

Hi Roger, I like the catchy chorus - a nice sing along! Reminds me a bit to ‘Cotton Eye Joe’ and I would try out the same beat to make the song even more danceable.  As already said by Brent and Reid, the lyric is really clever - but... Read More

November 26, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Silver Lake

Hi Sam, I love the melancholic feel of the song -  really a nice tune! What throws me off a bit are some lines where I had the feeling that the rhyme was more important than the contend. Try to use some more images. If you re-write those lines,... Read More

November 26, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Different This Time

Hi Tommy, I like the song, it’s honest and appeals to me. I especially like the dynamics that starts with the bridge. The lyrics and the melody fit together very well. The only weak point for me is the end: the text line ’ it was no different this time’... Read More

November 25, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on It's My Home

Hi Bobby, I love the first verse and the chorus. However I think the chorus could be even better if you not just repeat the same lines over and over again. You are loosing me a bit with the second verse. You’ve changed the rhythm of the lyric and... Read More