Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Healed in Heaven

Hey Kirk, I think this could be a nice hymn, especially the chorus. But I do not completely agree with the message of the first verse. I think we should use our time on earth to reconcile and not wait for heaven. That sounds fatalistic to me, like: let’s... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Days Like These

Hey Dave, I like the song - great performance too! Adding some solo guitar fills to bring in some color would be fine. Consider to place your hook/titel in the last line of the chorus - so that it ends on ‘days like these’ to create a better payoff... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Be On Your Best

Hi Bobby, ‘Humble & Kind’ by Lori McKenna is a great song and one of my favorites, you are following big footsteps. I like your idea and it’s a nice melody and feel. However consider to rewrite the verses in a way that they are more pointing to the... Read More

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on You OUght to see him now Girls

Hey Sheila, funny idea, nice story telling. Musically I think the chorus needs to stand out more, it’s too much in the same register as the verses are.

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I Want To Go Home

Hey Carla, nice song! Is it you singing? Beautiful voice, reminds me to Dido. The vocals could be more in the upfront. I also like the lyric, it’s simple, but it makes me feel something. However instead of the line ‘home is where the heart is’ I would look... Read More