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Frank Renfordt

June 19, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on GOD ONLY KNOWS

I think such songs like this are beyond criticism.It’s touching and beautiful, especially if you know the story behind. Your producer and singer did a great job too.

June 19, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Zombie

Thank you for listening and your encouraging comments. Actually the song was on hold and has raised some interest from publishers, but so far no one’s really bitten (as always). After all the lyric got a ‘Honorable Mention’ in American Songwriter’s lyric contest. I think it’s not... Read More

June 17, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on I Haven't Heard That Memory in A While

Hi Tom, nice lyric, easy for everyone to relate to. Melodically I think the separation between verse and chorus is a bit weak. I would try to change the chorus melody a bit and make it more outstanding. That would help to make the song more interesting and to keep... Read More

June 17, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Can’t Rewind

Hi Dorinda, your verses may be a bit too poetic, I wish there would be something more tangible in the story.  I really love the chorus melody. Your melodic style remembers me a bit to the best days of ‘Dido’. All in all a very nice tune!

June 17, 2018

Frank Renfordt gave feedback on Outskirts In

That’s a cool one. Could be the chorus is a little bit ‘wordy’ - but I’m not sure if it harms.