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February 02, 2018

Tony True gave feedback on Angel’s On Momma’s Side

Wonderful melody… I found some of the lyrics a little awkward and the rhyme for the verses not as strong as I think it could have been.  Also it seems that you changed the rhyme scheme in the last two verses. I feel the chorus is pretty good the... Read More

February 02, 2018

Tony True gave feedback on Meagans Song

Wow…these ones are always the toughest to write and record. I hope it brought you some comfort…

January 31, 2018

Tony True gave feedback on Dont Make Me Lie to You

Love this melody too… It’s not so much of not liking mystery it’s more about the clarity of what is going on in the song…story….who’s talking to whom… I have a very bad habit of doing what I call writing in my head…meaning I... Read More

January 31, 2018

Tony True gave feedback on This Bed Has Held Us Before

As always you have a great melody… I’m just not sure that the verses work as there doesn’t seem to be a rhyming scheme… Also it seems that in the chorus before the solo your lyrics changed but they weren’t reflected in the lyrics.  And it... Read More

January 26, 2018

Tony True gave feedback on Don’t Be Surprised

Some good imagery in here looks like you have a good start on things.