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December 13, 2017

Rusty Perez gave feedback on Ten Thousand Miles

Hey Brent, thanks for your thoughts. The reason I wrote “a rose will lose its bloom” is that I wanted to draw a contrast between roses and songs and strengthen the idea that a song can last long enough to stand the test of time like our love will. You’... Read More

December 13, 2017

Rusty Perez gave feedback on Right Side Of Good-bye

How about “the smilin’ side of livin’” Just a suggestion.

December 13, 2017

Rusty Perez gave feedback on Right Side Of Good-bye

Hi Jayne, Another great song! I really liked the positivity here. The hook was good too. Well executed. I’ll certainly listen to this a few times to learn a little about fitting extra words in to a metric structure. A couple of things sortof stopped the flow for me... Read More

December 07, 2017

Rusty Perez gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

Martin, this melody, the production, the performance is beautiful. It’s relaxing and mesmerizing. It reminds me a bit of the band Fairground Attraction.  I imagine that you might have rewritten this already, but it has an ethereal quality which goes with the nebulous lyrics. I notice that the... Read More

December 07, 2017

Rusty Perez gave feedback on If Love is Real

Hey Martin, this is a great song! The chorus is beautiful and deep, and nicely written I think. I have questions. As I understood it, the first verse seems like she’s having a “come to Jesus” moment, bottle of booz, soaking wet and the chorus is a prayer. ... Read More