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August 08, 2018

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on Wild at Heart

Thanks Leslie! This one was a lot of fun, where I just let some attitude hang out haha!

August 07, 2018

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know (Version 2)

Cheers Reid, especially for taking the time to check out TWO versions of the same song! Much appreciated, and glad to know the changes are all for the better! I will still revisit it at some point and pick up on Frank’s ideas of making the chorus lift up... Read More

August 06, 2018

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know

Oops forgot, smiley’s don’t work, ack! You can kinda see where they would have gone had I written them like this : ) instead!

August 06, 2018

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know

Yep! That said, the song is written for a specific reason - there are a couple of hits of the “They have cheated on you, so smash up their car / kill them with undetectable poison” and this one I wrote as kind of an answer to that kind of song... Read More

August 06, 2018

Tommy Grimes III gave feedback on What She Don't Know

Cheers Reid! There is a reworked version with shorter solo hiding on Frettie, but adding more for the chorus (harmony, higher melody, extra instrument, or something) is something I haven’t tackled… yet! But I do plan on getting back to this one and reworking it a bit to try... Read More