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October 31, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on Is That Her

I really like how coming out of the bridge into the final chorus puts that twist on the song. Cool song!

October 17, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on Like Juliet

Hi there Linne! Brent made a good choice in spotlighting this song. It’s beautiful both vocally and lyrically. I would not change anything about it. Great job!

August 16, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on Sunday Supper

That’s a great idea about removing the word “Sunday” from the first verse and saving it for the chorus. I had not thought of that, but it makes sense. It would easy enough to do in the first verse. However it is also used again in the second verse,... Read More

August 08, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on 2nd Luckiest Man In The World

I agree with Brent and Donna on this track. Cool song with great energy! Nice one Michael!

July 20, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on It Won't Stop

Donna, I agree 100% with everything that Brent suggested, and I could hear in my head some descriptive lyrics that could make the song strong. I also believe the title should be “Till You Let It Go”. Cool song Donna! Marvin