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August 16, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on Sunday Supper

That’s a great idea about removing the word “Sunday” from the first verse and saving it for the chorus. I had not thought of that, but it makes sense. It would easy enough to do in the first verse. However it is also used again in the second verse,... Read More

August 08, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on 2nd Luckiest Man In The World

I agree with Brent and Donna on this track. Cool song with great energy! Nice one Michael!

July 20, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on It Won't Stop

Donna, I agree 100% with everything that Brent suggested, and I could hear in my head some descriptive lyrics that could make the song strong. I also believe the title should be “Till You Let It Go”. Cool song Donna! Marvin

July 16, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on You Can Count On Me

I appreciate your feedback and so will pass it along to the studio I use. I understand what you mean by uploading one song per week, but my reason for joining was for another online presence to pitch from and gather feedback. Thanks again!

July 16, 2017

Marvin Adcock gave feedback on I Lied Too

Good suggestions Phillip. Thanks!