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April 21, 2018

Larry Palaszynski gave feedback on Say I’m Through

At first take it was too many “Say I’m thoughts” for me. But on second and yes, third listen,  I was thinking if occasionally they were sped up, slowed down, or on higher and lower notes once in while it would take some of the monotony out of... Read More

April 21, 2018

Larry Palaszynski gave feedback on This Ring

Its nice to hear a song from a woman where a guy isn’t perfect and the woman still stands by him and they work though imperfect times. These type of songs are harder to write and that’s why there are so few out there.  Nice job.

April 21, 2018

Larry Palaszynski gave feedback on I Thank God

I not sure how feedback works and wanted to get back to you (not sure to do it here or on my songs feedback area). Thanks for the feedback on my Mother’s Special Day song.  It was interesting that you pointed out that you thought the line “she... Read More

April 21, 2018

Larry Palaszynski gave feedback on A Mother's Special Day

Thanks for the feedback.  It was interesting that you pointed out that you thought the line “she had no skills” referred to the mother.  At that point in the song I was still referring to a baby.  Maybe I should have inserted the word “I” to make... Read More