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Michael R. J. Roth

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February 07, 2019

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on The Price of a Song

About a year ago, I took this lyric to a local songwriting workshop, and thought the notes l took afterwards might be of some interest, and hopefully encouraging to anyone facing rejection: “In general, people seemed a little confused about what the song is about. Didn’t seem like it... Read More

September 24, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Hold On

I take it this was written for a male voice, at least that’s the impression I get. I think you managed to convey a good sense of the situation with a few lines. I think the ending is a little weak, though. You might want to make that stronger.

September 24, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on A Farmer's Wife

I think the story has a good flow, and it unfolds well (in lyrical terms), but I find myself wishing I knew just a little more about her other than that she just wasn’t cut out for country life. You have some nice lyrics, they explain the story, but... Read More

September 24, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Homeless Sky

Wow, I’ll take Mark Knopfler! Thanks for the feedback. I’ve tried to play with the flow to avoid the breaks. Sometimes I can pull it off, but it’s hard.

February 19, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Homeless Sky

Thanks, Ani. I had a great time. It’s not about me.

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