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June 23, 2017

Michael Roth gave feedback on Hearts Wide Open

Thanks, Barry! A friend of mine told me it was “Dylanesque,” so maybe you’re on to something. I did record it solo originally, but added the vocals and guitar to give it a little more color. I think it pretty clearly defines itself as a Christian song, though I... Read More

June 22, 2017

Michael Roth gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

Should have noted your name before I wrote that. Good choice of singer.

June 22, 2017

Michael Roth gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

The music has a nice feel to it, and I like your voice (assuming your are singing). The lyric seems like a first draft, not clear what/who you are talking about, a lover or God perhaps, and it could benefit by some storytelling, even if it’s condensed. Verse 2... Read More

June 20, 2017

Michael Roth gave feedback on Your Life In Ink

I like the inventiveness of your songs. Great job of getting across what is really a very heavy theme with a nice, bouncy and infectious tune. I think it works. And you are a terrific wordsmith.

June 20, 2017

Michael Roth gave feedback on Twisted Ballerina

A very elegant way to treat a disturbing subject. Well done.