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Michael R. J. Roth

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February 11, 2019

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on The Price of a Song

I really appreciate the offer, Frank, but since the song is already in process with another songwriter, I must decline.

February 10, 2019

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on The Price of a Song

Thanks, Frank. I appreciate the feedback and am so glad you like it! And that it even got your music juices flowing!  I’ve been working with songwriter Eryn Michel on the music. I really like your tunes, so if you need any lyric input, I’d be happy... Read More

February 07, 2019

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on The Price of a Song

About a year ago, I took this lyric to a local songwriting workshop, and thought the notes l took afterwards might be of some interest, and hopefully encouraging to anyone facing rejection: “In general, people seemed a little confused about what the song is about. Didn’t seem like it... Read More

September 25, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on Hold On

I take it this was written for a male voice, at least that’s the impression I get. I think you managed to convey a good sense of the situation with a few lines. I think the ending is a little weak, though. You might want to make that stronger.

September 25, 2018

Michael R. J. Roth gave feedback on A Farmer's Wife

I think the story has a good flow, and it unfolds well (in lyrical terms), but I find myself wishing I knew just a little more about her other than that she just wasn’t cut out for country life. You have some nice lyrics, they explain the story, but... Read More