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August 04, 2017

Billy Sweeney gave feedback on Fire For Change

Brent - thank you.  i’ve struggled with this one because dave’s vocals/melody is so strong and i feel the lyrics don’t live up to that strength.  Another work in progress.  I appreciate you!

July 23, 2017

Billy Sweeney gave feedback on Take Away

Bob - as Brent said, thanks for sharing.  I listened to this and Concrete or Sand.  To be honest, I found it a bit difficult to stay engaged as the music was out of time.  if i could recommend tightening up the music i believe the listener... Read More

May 31, 2017

Billy Sweeney gave feedback on Apple Tree

Corey & Brent - thank you both for taking time to give feedback. Brent - any suggestions on where I can make it stronger?

May 21, 2017

Billy Sweeney gave feedback on Until He's Through

Jon - great job marrying rhythm w/ the words.  the song flows so well. could you post the lyrics?

May 21, 2017

Billy Sweeney gave feedback on Walk On By

Hey Sean - I appreciate the feedback.  wrote this with a band i was in years back, Delilah Why.  David, is a phenomenal singer/musician.  I love what he does. You’re spot on with the feedback on the chorus.  i always thought the same thing... Read More