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January 15, 2018

Bob Runk gave feedback on Dont be so hard on me

I like your songs.  All about relationships.  This one reminds me of one of my owN:  HAVE A HEART.

January 15, 2018

Bob Runk gave feedback on I Need Someone

I like this song.  Immediate emotional connection established. Simple effective lyrics I would put this in my movie ... if I had a movie to put it in!  Good job.  Reminds me of IN THE LIVING YEARS

November 30, 2017

Bob Runk gave feedback on Spotlight

I agree with Jeremy.  Great song.  Good job.  Looking forward to the band version, and to the “rebuild” of the version here.  It does feel like there’s an emotion waiting to come to the surface, and the crescendo that Jeremy references would be cool and... Read More

October 17, 2017

Bob Runk gave feedback on Fire For Change

Definitely a blues-emotive tune.  I like it! Guitar is hot but not intrusive.  Agree with Brent on the lyrics.  Nothing better than to get mid-way feedback on a WIP.

June 19, 2017

Bob Runk gave feedback on LA PLAYA WALK (A HIP-HOP/RAP TUNE)

“Playa” is Spanish for “beach”.  And the idea was a double-entendre ... as you noted ... playa and player.  Totally agree with you that the chorus should be shorter.  Need time to work on the things, and there is precious little! I do love Jeff’s style and his... Read More