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Brian Blevins

May 22, 2017

Brian Blevins gave feedback on With You

jeffrey i can take constructive criticism.  saying ‘i didn’t like it’ is not constructive. i seriously hope you do not believe that you provided anything useful.  you didn’t.  what about the song do you not like besides my singing because as i noted i am... Read More

May 21, 2017

Brian Blevins gave feedback on With You

Jeffrey, The song is catchy.  Do you mind posting lyrics so people can read them?  No need to make people do more than they have to here. I hear you about my singing.  I do not plan to take vocal lessons.  Would be a waste of... Read More

May 20, 2017

Brian Blevins gave feedback on I Don't Listen To The Radio

Hi Pete. I got the same “Don’t like it.” from the same person.  I got a good laugh from it. Sean and Phil covered the points I would hit on. I really think this is a near concept for a song.  Not sure if it is original... Read More

May 18, 2017

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Workin

Hi Dave. Great tune man.  Well done. To me the 2nd line of V1/2 do not feel right in the flow.  It could be the way the singer did it It feels like the word ‘frogs’ is sort of hanging out there and not quite in place. ... Read More

May 18, 2017

Brian Blevins gave feedback on Good Old Days

thanks Jeffrey.  i am not a big fan of it either i just wrote it to get it done since it was something i started. prob 40 years too late.