Joined: May 9, 2017
Richard Likes: 9 Songs
Richard Kirk gave feedback on Make My Daddy Proud
Rick: I can tell this means a great deal to you, a personal statement, etc. and there are some good descriptive lines here, I just think changing the words so much on each ch, kind of deletes the unity of the song overall. I wouldn’t really know... Read More
Richard Kirk gave feedback on What Are You Doing in My Dream?
thanks for your comments!
Richard Kirk gave feedback on Strip Mall Church
hi mitch, some great imagery here, story is well told, my biggest concern is that the first verse is in present tense and I think the rest should be too, “It’s a strip mall church” and is therefore still going , etc. Would be stronger that way, I... Read More
Richard Kirk gave feedback on A Little Nudge
thanks for you comments!