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June 08, 2017

David Pritchett gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)

Hi Phillip,  I never thought that you were implying anything.  I appreciate knowing and I do appreciate you taking the time to search it out and make me aware of it.  Thank you so much.  I was jjust saying I never would do it intentionally cause... Read More

June 08, 2017

David Pritchett gave feedback on My Country Heart Lives in Tennessee (Work in Progress)

Hi Robert,  Thanks for your feedback! I’ll pass what you said along to the musician/singer (Jeff Wisnom) as it’s not me. I wrote the lyrics. Hi Phillip, Thanks for your feedback   I never heard Bo’s song until you said check it out. I did... Read More

June 06, 2017

David Pritchett gave feedback on False Paper Clowns

Hi Barry, I really like the organ plus the guitar at the end makes it come across in a rock anthem style.  I feel adding more guitar through the song as you indicated is a great idea. Since i am a lyricist mainly I’d have enjyed more rhyming... Read More

June 06, 2017

David Pritchett gave feedback on Girl In A Cowboy Hat

Hi Ronnie, I agree with Phillip, cut “she” some.  I was going to say add the A in USA also and you can keep the Hey too as it rhymes and fits in if you want   You could say V1 line 6:  “And she looks good wearing my... Read More

June 06, 2017

David Pritchett gave feedback on "LOVE ME TONIGHT"

Hi Robert, Great retro feel and I enjoyed the flow of the music with the melody.  As far as the lyrics go yes, they are simplistic, but in this case I agree with you, they are enough as they fit the music and melody and leave a nice feeling... Read More