Graham Donahue gave feedback on Five-String

Maybe if you changed the line to “strumming on a 5 string” instead of “picking” that would be less confusing, as well as more fitting since you tend to “pick” the banjo and “strum” the guitar/ Just a thought. I guess it is already recorded now anyway.

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Five-String

I love the song, but I agree the the “Five-String” line is confusing. In the country music market it may be fine, but to a bluegrass artist “five-string” means banjo. Plus, you have the banjo in the recording, which kind of “hints” that it is referring to the banjo. Cool... Read More

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Love Your Body

Love it! This is a good reminder for being descriptive. Most of us amateurs would just talk about how much we “love your body” but wouldn’t go into why. Great song! Hope it gets cut!

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Antidote

Great song. It has a different rhyming pattern than I’m used to, and some fresh rhymes, which makes it new and interesting. Good job!

Graham Donahue gave feedback on "I LOOOVE THAT WOMAN"

I think I agree with Philip. There needs to be a reason why you would stay with her. Maybe you could have a bridge where there is a plot twist and you talk about all of YOUR problems and, how the fact that she deals with your’s makes you... Read More