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June 29, 2017

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Since He Won't Leave

Thanks! I’ve got some good ideas on some ways I can improve it!

June 09, 2017

Graham Donahue gave feedback on List of Regrets (Re-write) Version 3

Wow! Great job on the changes. I will say, I like the melody of the original chorus a little better, but this one is better lyrically. Making the verses the “list” and the chorus the “warning” is a much better structure than before. It repeats the point of the song,... Read More

June 04, 2017

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Five-String

Maybe if you changed the line to “strumming on a 5 string” instead of “picking” that would be less confusing, as well as more fitting since you tend to “pick” the banjo and “strum” the guitar/ Just a thought. I guess it is already recorded now anyway.

June 04, 2017

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Five-String

I love the song, but I agree the the “Five-String” line is confusing. In the country music market it may be fine, but to a bluegrass artist “five-string” means banjo. Plus, you have the banjo in the recording, which kind of “hints” that it is referring to the banjo. Cool... Read More

May 30, 2017

Graham Donahue gave feedback on Love Your Body

Love it! This is a good reminder for being descriptive. Most of us amateurs would just talk about how much we “love your body” but wouldn’t go into why. Great song! Hope it gets cut!