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December 09, 2015

Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on I Am Beautiful

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December 09, 2015

Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on I Am Beautiful

Hi Dave I’m quickly becoming a fan of your writing.  The demo is good, the melody and changes are good. So, if you don’t mind, let me dig a little deeper.  IMNSHO, the lyrics could make this song great. 0.  The lyrics, as written, blow the... Read More

November 28, 2015

Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on Green Light

Very clever writing! I’ve listened to it twice and I feel that there is not enough separation in the production - too much stuff is sitting too close to the centre and maybe some EQ’ing could help. But, this is probably just a demo and it probably doesn’... Read More

November 28, 2015

Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on With You

You have a nice voice.  You say that you’re still learning to play guitar.  You’ll learn to play more smoothly, keep practicing.  You recorded this on your phone.  I’d bet that you put the phone on a table - closer to the guitar... Read More

November 04, 2015

Paul Tarvydas gave feedback on Hella Good Time

The hardest thing to do is to critique one’s own songs.  I am continuously amazed by the critiques I get and how I could have missed their points. I hope that this site is about that - getting valuable critiques.