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Jeremy Shere

October 15, 2015

Jeremy Shere gave feedback on Artificial Light

Interesting sound. I like the collage style and the dark, droning tone. Unless you purposely want the lyrics to sounds murky and mysterious, you might try bumping the vocals up a bit in the mix. As recorded, the vocals are pretty muddy, buried way down in the mix.

October 15, 2015

Jeremy Shere gave feedback on Mountaintop

Hi, I like this tune’s uptempo, hard-charging sound. The production is nice and crisp and clear, everything sounds pretty good. My one note concerns the vocal. It’s basically fine, but I suspect you can do even better. For such a hard-charging song, the vocal sounds a bit restrained... Read More

October 15, 2015

Jeremy Shere gave feedback on Stories

Thanks much.

October 11, 2015

Jeremy Shere gave feedback on Reload

Nice tune. I like the simple, clear arrangement. Some nice chord changes, too.

October 09, 2015

Jeremy Shere gave feedback on Carnival

I actually like the “up down spinning around” part—the extra syllables add an interesting dimension, to my ears.