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April 22, 2017

Mikalyn Hay gave feedback on Titanic

Thanks Phillip - the back story on the song is about a friend that was making some very Titanic mistakes.  I wanted it to be ominous and dark.  Despite the warning signs - they continued on.  I like the idea of My Titanic - thanks for taking... Read More

April 03, 2017

Mikalyn Hay gave feedback on Fade Away

HI Dave - first off, thanks for the feedback and the kind words.  Its funny because it was never my intention to write a country song with the track.  It was turned kind of country because my dad wanted to see what would happen if I took the... Read More

March 31, 2017

Mikalyn Hay gave feedback on Feel like movin' on

Cool metal track - and I loved the vibe.  My only suggestion would be to expand the lyrics a bit so the listener gets some clue as to why you felt imprisoned and need to break free and move on.    Still enjoyed the song though!!

March 31, 2017

Mikalyn Hay gave feedback on Fade Away

Thank you Brent for taking the time to listen and offer suggestions. I totally agree with you.  As a young writer, I know when I am taking shortcuts and taking the easy lryic choice, and not taking the story where it could go.  In pop you can sing... Read More

March 21, 2017

Mikalyn Hay gave feedback on Monday Morning Church Demo

Thanks for sharing the demo Brent!!  A treat to hear it!!