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January 10, 2018

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Jayne: Thanks a lot for your nice comments and constructive feedback. River/riverside: Excellent point, it’s hard to be in the water if your your on the side of the river/riverbank. We should probably clarify this somehow. V1/line 2: You might be right. Maybe there is a better... Read More

December 19, 2017

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Noora: thanks a lot, appreciate you taking the time to listen to the song. Rusty: Thanks for your nice and constructive comments. Yes, it was intentional to make the chorus work for both characters. “Stared off” instead of “she was staring..”: Good call, thanks! More imagery: There can never be... Read More

December 01, 2017

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on If Love is Real

Michael: Thank you, appreciate you taking the time review the song. Angie: I know what you mean. From a songwriter’s perspective everything seems perfectly clear. Then you realise listeners might have a different opinion. Thanks for pointing this out.

June 26, 2017

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on Whatever Will Be

Hi Mikalyn! Thanks for your feedback, appreciate it! Hopefully, I’m able to post a new version soon.

June 26, 2017

Martin Lorentzson gave feedback on Antidote

Hi Mikalyn! What I love about this song: the verse melody, 1st verse lyrics, the piano arrangement and the vocals throughout the song. Soooooo good! What I miss is: 1) some kind of content development in the second verse. We already know he’s gone and that he left her feeling... Read More