Joined: February 23, 2015
Jamie Likes: 6 Songs
Jamie Sagle gave feedback on Kitchenettes
Love how the simplicity of the lyrics say a whole lot! Great melody and phrasing too!!!
Jamie Sagle gave feedback on Awakening
Thank you, Dick! I know how the labeling of my song structure is confusing. That was a subject we went over at the Java meeting I went to and unfortunately you weren’t there. One writer there made a commit about the part you mentioned. The part you said... Read More
Jamie Sagle gave feedback on Carnival
Even though “spin” seems to fit in better, (which “to fit in” is boring and safe and I like to shake up the rules of songwriting because thats how new ideas happen)... I would keep it as “spinning”. It gives the line more interest and its what made me want... Read More
Jamie Sagle gave feedback on Listening To You
Hey Joey! Great message! I agree connecting with others is what helps us get through this life. Here’s my opinion on the pace: Anytime you repeat the hook in a chorus that has an interesting melody, even when if it’s slower, it sticks with you. The pace is... Read More