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October 23, 2017

Brent Baxter gave feedback on I LAY HERE AND I LIE

Hi, Brian!  Thanks for sharing your song.  I like the title.  However, I’m not sure you’ve set it up effectively.  Sounds like you’re lying to other people during the day, but the truth comes out at night.  So you’re not really... Read More

October 19, 2017

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Between A Rock And A Hard Place

Thanks for sharing this!  I dig the groove.  I like that it has groove and is positive.  One thing I noticed: in the chorus you rhyme “place” and “space.”  Then you do it again in the 1st verse.  Try to keep your rhymes different throughout... Read More

October 19, 2017

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Longneck

Thanks for the feedback, ya’ll!

October 19, 2017

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Mr. Happy

Hey, Marcus, thanks for sharing your music with us!  I like the phrasing on the verses- how you have the quick phrasing but don’t let it go too long before hitting a few longer phrases.  I also like the groove.  Laid back, feels good. For me,... Read More

October 19, 2017

Brent Baxter gave feedback on Mistaken Identity

Hey, Marcus.  I like the energy it gives off right from the start.  Dig the groove.  The emotion of the song is clear.  I wish the title was more clear- if you didn’t list the title as “Mistaken Identity,” I would never know to call... Read More