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December 10, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Fly On The Wall

Hey Sonya!  I like the concept… that no relationship is a fairy tale.  I was a little confused about the “you” in “if you’da been the fly on…”... Is this character talking to her partner?  Because then in the Chorus it says “you and me”? ... Read More

December 10, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Right Side Of Good-bye

Thsnk you Shane, Sonya and Noora! I really appreciate it!! So glad you like it. Thanks for listening!

December 09, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Broken Hearted

A Jason Aldean vibe.  I like the lyric “feeling so far south”. The song sounds hooky, but I agree with Brent that there could be a lot more to support the title Broken Hearted.  I was a little confused as to whether he was going to be talking... Read More

December 09, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Then I Will Be

Nice melody.  I like the melody especially at the beginning of the chorus on “So tell me everything’s gonna be just fine”.  I think you could support that concept by showing us what that would “look” like to her.  For example, in the first verse she... Read More

December 09, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Every Single Christmas

Nice. Wonderful melody. I agree with Brent.  I was expecting the song to be about the relationship with the person she was waiting to come through the door.  I was a bit confused throughout the song.  I would take another stab at it because it’s worth... Read More