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May 13, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Put Your Pants Back On

Thank you David! I appreciate that!

May 11, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Put Your Pants Back On

Thank you Bob!  This is a home demo.  My co-writer from the U.K. put it together.  Glad you like it!

May 11, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Made for Shades

Interesting and fun song Phillip.  I agree with Brent.  Also, I would take a look at all the lyrics and try to make them as conversational as possible,  ie.. “I pop a sly smile as I take quickie look Current status partner swings a blindin’ right hook” ... Read More

May 11, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Put Your Pants Back On

Thanks Phillip!  Glad you like it!  Thanks for the suggestions. Jayne

May 10, 2017

Jayne Sachs gave feedback on Before You Know It

“walking, running, flying”... I really like that line!  Great job on this solo write Dave!