Joined: December 13, 2013
Brian Likes: 1 Songs
Brian Smith gave feedback on Perfectly Perfect
Dave, Unfortunately I can’t hear the music on my computer, so I can only comment on the lyrics. The lyrics seem to me to be nice , simple, and straight forward and do a good job of getting the meaning of the song across. My only critiques would... Read More
Brian Smith gave feedback on Tail Lights
Jamie, Unfortunately I can’t play the song on my computer, but I think the lyrics are well done and do a good job of getting the meaning of the song across. I would agree with Dick’s suggestions if you are aiming at making the song more comerical. ... Read More
Brian Smith gave feedback on The Music Tree
Benny, I’m afraid I can’t comment on the music or talking the first chorus as I can’t get the songs to play on my computer. However, in answer to your question about the meaning it comes across nice and clear to me. A great job... Read More
Brian Smith gave feedback on Talking to a Ghost
Eric, I’m afraid I haven’t been able to get songs to play on my computer so I can’t comment on the melody other then to say others seem to have really liked it and a good melody, to me, is the most important part. I agree with... Read More
Brian Smith gave feedback on The Music Doesn't Judge Me
Charlie, Unfortunately due to computer problems I have been unable to play the songs on my computer. Just reading the lyrics on your song makes me wish I could hear the music. I really like the lyrics, they seem to do a nice job of getting the idea... Read More